Woah...
I hate the original, so.. ZERO :D
Nah.. umm.. well see.. I do hate the original, and this definitely made it much better, especially at :29 - :35... that was pretty awesome how you did that right there... the only thing that's really bugging me, is that I'm getting bored listening to it half way through, nothing really changes other then going from pattern to pattern... I think you need something very crazy and new placed in the middle-end, and make it longer... just less boring. (Yes, it's short.. but so.. common.) All in all, the score would be 10 and 5, just because you did make the song better.. props for that.. I just wish it was different from all the other songs.. beat, saw, piano, etc. ... yawn :D