Ok Mr...
Not Busy Today :D
Let's See Now..
Main Melody : Ok, But A Little Simple.
First Transition : Not Great, But Good Start
After First (Fast) : Better Than Main Melody..
Second Transition (Buildup) : Very Welly Done :P
Break After Second : It Has an Interesting Drum Beat... But Not Perfect.
Break After Break =) : Prett Good... Buiolds Up Into It.
Afterwards : All Things Put Together To Make Final "Melody" Good..
All In All, I Like Beginning And End Best..
I Think you've Lost Your Talent Here ! 0.0
Your Other Songs Were Much Better.
4/5
8/10
<DjT>
PS : Bass Was Nice :D